A dark shrouded figure moved swiftly in the darkness making their way up a steep hill to an old tower. Stopping as they reached the rusted door they looked out behind before disappearing behind the door. The tower was dark and cold, the stones that made the stairs and walls crumbled with years of neglect. It wasn’t long before the hidden figure reached another door; this time they opened it without hesitation. The old chamber they entered was covered in dark red satin draping from the ceilings, and covering the stone floor. The only light in the dark room came from the two huge arched windows that looked down on to the valley to where the kingdom lay Unlike the rest of the tower, the chamber was perfectly preserved and clean. There was no furniture in the room apart from one desk with a huge leather chair behind it. The desk was empty apart from one photo placed at the corner of the wooden surface, and a sheet of paper scrunched into a ball. The huge chair had its back to the silent figure who moved slowly towards the desk.
‘You have the news Feline,’ a husky voice echoed freezing Feline in place, she shrugged off the hood of her jacket and straightened up as tall person rose from the chair.
‘Yes, master.’ Her voice was shrill and squeaky, her blues eyes searched franticly over her master’s figure.
‘Well,’ he demanded slamming his fist against the way making his body shake. Feline moved back her blonde hair slipping out from behind her neck.
‘It’s happened,’ she said warily as she watched her master’s figure tense.
‘Did you do as I asked?’ his voice echoed louder around the chamber.
‘Well master before I got there it had…gone!’ barely speaking above a whisper she moved back again. She hadn’t moved back fast enough her master was across the chamber in seconds and wrapped his hand around her small neck.
‘You will finish the task I asked you to do and now!’ his face was inches from hers and his green eyes searched Felines face. He dropped her fragile body on to the floor and watched her scramble to the door.
‘Yes master Akakios .’ Feline’s voice was shaken with fear as she disappeared behind the door. Akakios moved to sit behind his desk again picking up the scrunched piece of paper as he did so. Smoothing it out he read the words he had already memorised one last time before smashing down the photo.
‘I loved her,’ he sighed as he disappeared from the tower.
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