What do you think of my short poemy?

Question

a bit dark at the beginning but oh well i was in a dark place in my mind at one time.

Darkness,

overwhelms the light.

demons they come at night,

like a shadow.

strangled cries,

endless pain,

until the dawn,

a ray of hope,

like a dagger of light,

the sun from its hilt.

Darkness gone,

bright thoughts awoken,

until the night is brought unspoken.

Answer 1

That was pretty good! Keep up the good work!

Answer 2

Wow, you weren't emo when you wrote this were you?

Answer 3

Yeah, it ain't too bad, well done.