What do you think of my song?

Question

i need you

i live for you

and i will die for you

people always wonder

walk around and say

it cant be true

you cant be real

but they dont know

they dont know

that

all that is good is because of you

all that is true

you are the world

you are my savior

you are the my all powerfull lord

some people just dont care

some people just stare

while we say grace

because they dont know..

no they dont know

all that is good is because of you

all that is true

you are the world

you are my savior

you are the my all powerfull lord

say if you were true,

wouldnt stand by and let the bad loom

rapist, murderers, and criminals wouldnt walk the on the street

if there was a God, he would rein down on their feet

they just dont know

all that is good is because of you

all that is true

you are the world

you are my savior

you are the my all powerfull lord

you have a plan in place

so lets gather around and imbrace

for you are everything

you are wonderful

imbrace your fate, there is life still

for you God, al

Answer 1

Faith! Someone after my own heart. What a breath of fresh air. You're very talented.

My only constructive criticism for you is when your posting a song, be sure to mark out verses, bridges, and the chorus, so your not reposting the chorus every time it comes up, you simply write "chorus" well done. i applaud you.