What do you think of my video on why im a reublican? Please!!! I need some input!!!!?

Question

This is the script, please, pelase, pelase, make any changes you feel necesary! Thank you!!!!!

i am often asked, both by my friends, and by my enemies, why i am a

republican. "it's 2008.....why are you still a republican?" is what I

often hear.

"you can't even vote" they say.

Of course, it can't be answered in one sentence. even two minutes is a

strectch. but since i live in america, the greatest country on earth,

where freedom of speech is a certainty, not a question mark, i think

i'll give it a try.

i am a republican because i realize that winning is tough, but defeat is

even tougher.

i am a republican because i like to keep my money, and prefer lower

taxes over higher.

i am a republican because i can walk outside anytime i like and tell

people what i beleive, and realize who has made that possible, and i

thank the veterans of this great country every oppurtunity i get

i am a republican because nobody's ever worked for a poor man.\

Answer 1

Change "because i like to keep my money, and prefer lower

taxes over higher"

To: "because I'm GREEDY and I'm not willing to pay my fair share to support the country I love; the country that provided the environment for me to make such significant economic gains."  

(and if you haven't made "significant" economic gains, why are you a Republican?)

Answer 2

Seems to take allot of poor working men to make one Republican rich and if there illegals which is what all Republicans seem to like to hire, so much the better.

Answer 3

I love personal responsibility and morals! Teach it to the liberals!

Answer 4

a republican was in office in october of 1929

Answer 5

You arent old enough to be paying taxes.

You arent old enough to vote.

You arent old enough to serve the country.

Yet you are going to throw a few "Texasisms" around with some 50 cent words, and think that is a convincing argument.  You have no personal experience with what you are talking about, but you preach it to others with a self satisfaction that comes from your own lower intestine?

Yep....you are a republican.