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What do you think of my work? How would you classify it?

by Guest56172  |  earlier

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Here's something I wrote. I'm starting to write songs for my new band, but I'm not polished and I don't know if this makes a good song. Maybe a poem? Anyway, here it is:

You cry foul, scream for justice

Make sharp accusations without knowing all the facts

Your ears only open to one side

For the voice of the other is nothing but lies

Did you ever stop to think

That things aren't always as they appear?

3 boys convicted of a horrible crime

With no evidence, only claims and tears

As your eyes scan the story, anger leaps in your heart

To you, the matter is simply black and white

You need no further convincing, your opnion formed

Did you ever stop to think

That there are two sides?

The press catches word

And a wildfire sweeps across Tobacco Road

3 boys now isolated from the world

Singled out, left to die

With no defense, only biting resent

And no one stopped to think

That truth may rest on the lips of these boys

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  1. v good!


  2. Wow!

    I loved it!

    I'd classify it as sad reality or something.

    It's great for a song or poem!

    Great work!!!

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