What do you think of my you poetry?

Question

Frightened

I am frightened,

of the girl,

she looks at me,

with cold eyes

Her lips,

They mouth words,

She chills my heart,

As she cries,

Tears of blood.

I am frightened,

of the girl,

who touches my cheek,

with cold hands.

Her nails,

The dig into me,

Blood running down,

Hitting the floor,

Dripping.

She's not me,

she's not me,

but there's something inside,

familiar , that I can see.

I am frightened,

of the girl,

in the mirror,

who somewhat resembles me,

so i smashed the mirror,

There is nothing left to see.

Thank you.

Answer 1

wow. That was very good! It was creative, and deep. I like to write poetry too! I'm just not good:( At least not as good as you lol. Hope I helped!

Answer 2

This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

Answer 3

The problem is, The stanzas are the same making the poem more difficult to be enjoyed by the common persons. If you changed the stanzas then it would be much better.

Although i was dripping in tears after wards becuase it was so beautiful.

Answer 4

i like it! ;)

ya, its cool, yet very emo