What do you think of my zombie/fiend deck?

Question

please let me know and also rate it...thanks!

high level monsters:

invader of darkness

vampire genesis

despair from the dark

zoa

dark necrofear

masked beast

mid level monsters:

ryu kokki

dark dust spirit

dark ruler ha des

vampire lord

non sacrifice monsters:

vampire lady

the gross ghost of fled dreams

pyramid turtle x3

regeneratoing mummy x2

double coston x2

shadow slayer

grave protector

opticlops

malice doll of demise

master kyonshee x2

soul-absorbing bone tour

wall of illusion

fear from the dark

castle of dark illusions

sangan

brain jacker

spells:

book of life x2

monster reborn

wasteland

heavy storm

premature burial

call of the mummy

violet crystal

card of safe return

curse of the masked beast

tribute of the doomed

mask of the accursed

traps:

torrential tribute

negate attack

call of the haunted

sarketsu armor

trap jammer

magic jammer

Answer 1

take out zoa trap jammer negate attack tribute of the doomed

card of safe return violet crystal wasteland brain jacker castle of dark illusions master kyonshee x2 mask of the accursed

the gross ghost of fled dreams

and add 1+ book of life 2+ sarketsu armor +2 curse of the masked beast(if your going to run more then one) +3 dark core ( its like a tribute of the doomed but removes instaed of kills) +2 necroface good in zombie decks +2 call of the mummy

there are lot of thinks that need to be done with this deck plus pick one theme not two

hope this helps

Answer 2

its ok

Answer 3

you have to many monsters

also go with one zombie ~or~ fiend they don't work together well.  

look at this:

(2) Ryu Kokki

(2) Cyber Dragon

(3) Zombie Master

(1) Sniper Hunter

(1) Il Blud

(3) Goblin Zombie

(1) Morphing Jar

(3) Pyramid Turtle

(1) Neo Spacian Grand Mole

(1) Spirit Reaper

(1) Sangan

(1) Giant Rat

Spells: 14

(1) Brain Control

(3) Card of Safe Return

(2) Creature Swap

(1) Lightning Vortex

(3) Book of Life

(1) Heavy Storm

(1) Mystical Space Typhoon

(1) Premature Burial

(1) Monster Reborn

Traps: 6

(2) Dust Tornado

(1) Mirror Force

(1) Torrential Tribute

(2) Rageki Break