What do you think of our paranormal site?we are kinda new at the internet webpage thing and just want feedback

Question

http://www.freewebs.com/tjghosthunters/

Answer 1

Just my opinion...I don't like the scary guy (or girl) (hard to tell). You DEFINITELY need to correct lots of spelling and capitalization. Make sentences correctly and start each sentence with a capital letter and correct punctuation at the end. People will judge your website by this too...not just by the content. It shouldn't be hard to find a friend who can correct your spelling and grammar etc. Don't you have spell check for the spelling? Don't mean to be critical. I admire you for undertaking this. (oops..scary word!!!lol)

Edit..to tiny dancerr....I can't read yours. The yellow is too light. But, I like the set up. Cute idea!

Answer 2

maybe you should add a little bit more stuff =] keep up the hard work! wanna check out mine, please? http://share.buddy4u.com/view/%2Ad+o+w+n...

Answer 3

You may wish to add a few things to your Site and Equipment List....so you may be more Objective.  You can never have too much Datum, and it takes more than EVPs to conclusively point to a "haunting".   Check out our Site, and feel free to copy our Methodology if you choose.  Good Luck!

http://www.southernparanormalexamination...

Answer 4

Pretty good for a first page! (You spelled 'investigate' wrong :P ) I like the layout- it's not unneccesarily complicated. And it sucks that I don't live in Arkansas...

Good job!

Answer 5

looks good, i agree with the first answer that maybe more stuff would be benificial.

Answer 6

Ok, I'm going to be honest. The were several misspellings on the front page. I think it is important to project a positive image--to attract new people. The layout was nice, but correct the misspellings. I'm trying to be helpful, not rude.

Sincerely, Rose

Answer 7

I do not mean to be overly critical but I have never been one to sugar coat the truth. If I was looking for a team to investigate my site, based on your website, you would be the very last people I would contact.  Your spelling is atrocious as is your grammar. The content lacks any sort of professionalism. I am left with the feeling that a few kids in middle school have put it together. To pander for money and equipment is not only rude but shameful as well. This field is chocked full inexperienced, unprofessional, jokes and the last thing you need is to let the world know you are one of them before you have even gotten your foot into the door. It does not seem as though you are new to the Internet but new to any sort of decorum. To accept anyone into your group is just asking for trouble. Trust me, I DO NOT let just anyone into my establishments or home. I think you really need to reconsider your entire approach to this web site. Perhaps spending some time developing a strategy and researching the paranormal in a literary fashion as opposed to in person would serve to better your site and prevent one more person from making a mockery of a field several educated individuals have work so hard to bring into the mainstream.