What do you think of the poem below?

Question

Upon the soaring wings of a flying beast

The knight landed on the vast tree-less plain

Sitting on his stout but elegant mount

He cautiously followed the narrow lane

He could see no one, and hear no sound

But he felt the savage gaze of a foe

Following his tail with every step

As if in the form of a black, grim crow

His mount, a creature unknown to many

strolled with pride, with its head held high

an ingenious blend of many beasts

Unrivalled on land, a lord of the sky

its strength surpassing a hundred steeds

its flight majestic, a glorious sight

with its black, crooked beak and sturdy paws

It spread fear when soaring in the height

An ancient lone-oak stood by the lane

providing a precious oasis of shade

And on its wizen bark one could see

strange carvings from the tip of a blade

“Now we shall rest here, under a tree”

Stated the pleased knight to his weary mount

And he retreated to the dark shades

that had saved him a bit of resting ground

Answer 1

I thought it was very good...nice job.

Answer 2

wow that is really good

Answer 3

its great x

Answer 4

another good poem but lengthy

Answer 5

It's pretty cool, I'm not sure what imagery or symbolism to take translate it to a more meaningful work. But as far as a  ballad about a knight and a dragon goes, it's nice.

Answer 6

You have potential !!! Great !!

Answer 7

Your poem was excellent. it show pride in country,  bravery and courage for helping others, strength and compassionate to doing all you can. Not give up without na fight and threw it all will fight with all your might until the end. you gave so much details and you not only painted a picture but you gave to much love and ambition to due was right . it was excellent you got skills I don't know you but i am so proud of you. keep up the good work