What do you think of the poem i wrote entitled "Government Establishments"?

Question

Twisted little society

Fxcking land of liberty

The government feeds their lies to thee

So why the h**l do you listen?

Buy and sell the latest trends

While people shoot and kill our friends

War and violence never end

So why do we obey?

Mechanical animals screech and moan

Everyone is just a clone

Preachers preach with mocking drone

So why do we always stand?

With no more diversity

We are all no longer free

Why can no one fxcking see

Why are we so blind?

Government lets the fundies lead

With their lies, they fill and feed

Our minds with endless awful greed

So why must we follow?

New government policy

There is no individuality

We're all the same as you can see

Will you believe the lies?

i hate america u_u

please tell me what you think

Answer 1

Wow. I'ts lovely. I like it. It's true.

Answer 2

Sweet! I think this would make great song lyrics, if you are not in a band yourself or know any bands that would cover it, I have a few connections to some bands that would really dig poetry like this. Send me an email through my profile and I'll tell you how to instantly copyright your poems for free, so you can send them on to where ever you wish. I'd tell you here, but it probably would be considered bad form by Y!A, even though it is completely free.

Answer 3

I lurve it

Answer 4

Wow, I love your poem!  I agree with it 100%. Americans are blind and complacent.  They do not see how the government is controlling them in a fascist manner.  The ignorance shown by the majority of Americans never ceases to amaze me.