What do you think of the song i've written?

Question

be brutaly honest. it usually takes me 10 min to write a song, but this one took 2hrs, cuz i tried to make it really good.

Holding on for one last memory. it's just too soon to let go. i wanna go back to that specail place, cuz you made me wanna live for tommorow. everytime i get closer to forgetting you, i find myself back at the beginning and i realize i don't want to lose you. you are a part of me now. losing you is like losing myself. but i realize tonight's the night to burn your picture with a lighter, cuz i don't wanna be stuck walking in this shadow of you haunting me...anymore.

Chorus: i wish you were here with me to tell me that life goes on, cuz i know you have. I wanna hold on to each precious memory so i can make them last a lifetime. when you closed the door the picture frames shattered to the ground and i hurried to pick up the bits and pieces, so i could frame them again, only this time, to make them last a lifetime. can you just hold my hand til we get to the

Answer 1

Great!

Answer 2

I find it good. It's poetic, romantic, interesting, expressive and VERY emotional. You have talent but in the chorus It says "Can you just hold my hand til we get to the???" to the what? Anyway, you're talented, anyone can see that I just kinda' wish I could picture it mor, you know, the tune. etc. Anyway, keep on writing songs!

Answer 3

I love it!! I wish I had it on my iPod. The lyrics are so amazing and poetic. They make me think about unrequited love. It's so powerful! :)

Answer 4

I think is good, I like it.