What do you think of the songs I wrote?

Question

I recently made a youtube musician account where I put all the guitar songs I wrote. Can I get some feedback on some of them? My account is www.youtube.com/publicvacancy. Tell me what you think.

Answer 1

I think you lack rythm utterly. Buy a metronome. Oh, and your ideas are pretty derivative, but you'll write better as you get better at the guitar and realise there are other forms of music outside of whiny emo