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What do you think of the stanza below? (destiny)?

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Destiny

The river flows, its water cold

to where it leads I'm not foretold

what matters is how you sail

ready to go and start your tale?

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  1. I think it's great..short simple and true!


  2. I was feeling it until the last line. Play around with the last line.
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