What do you think of the stanza below? (poetry)?

Question

Tick-Tock

tick tick tick the clock hands race

one by one they pace their space

they never rest and never sleep

to make a clock worthy to praise

Answer 1

why tick tick tick....why not .....tick tock tick ....

anyway i will teach this one to my children at school.....i really like this one.....thanks...can i use this on my own class...please.....i will name this of course after you....thanks again...