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What do you think of these 2 poems????

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1. love rehab

24 days, 13 hours, 7 minutes, and 3 seconds

since i last spoke to you

the pain is extreme

the voices in my head are screaming

my body is freezing

and breaking out in sweat

minute after minute it gets worse

i drop to my knees

tears start to fall

my addiction to you

pis so hard to drop

i must stick through

to get over you

because loving you is like a drug

it is poisioning me

after i can finally face you

i will never take your love again

2.you

You were the one boy who made me think day and night

who made it all alright

the one boy who made me smile

then end it all in one night

it was such a surprise

until i realized what all was on my mind

this love was untrue, noithing to do with you

just the thought of having someone

now were over, everything is though

and i don't really care about you

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  1. Wow...the last one was pretty harsh, but they're both good! :)


  2. I understand why you feel that way about me after what I did to you the last time we spoke. I envied you.

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