What do you think of these God segments? Do they make sense one at a time?

Question

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THE STYLE WAS

The meeting with God

seemed to last for hours,

Outside of the reality,

It was a blink of the eye.

I wanted so badly to not be

enraptured by the moment,

But, as it turned out,

A moment was all I needed.

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Answer 1

Yep, gotta love

those timeless magic moments.  

Sometimes I wonder

if in the second before you

die,

time goes sproiiiingggg

and becomes infinite in your head.  

Time is, after all,

very elastic.  

And fantastic.  

And totally relative.  

Especially when the relatives

come over to visit.  

Talk about time slowing down

to a snail's pace

in this case.  

Answer 2

Yes they make sense one at a time. This one, however, I had to read over slowly. It seems to be going in a circle and I wanted to make sure I wasn't missing anything. I especially like the "Outside of reality" line. It threw me at first for I did not see the brilliance behind it.

I was delighted greatly by this.  

Answer 3

And yet I am compelled to hold on, each and every line becoming a mystery within a mystery, wearing masks behind masks. Meaning to be found...or a delectable conundrum. I am not sure; I quest anon.

Answer 4

"Hi!",

Short, brief and precise.

nice piece of poetry.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 5

I read it as a Trigee. I am not good at S2 in Trigees, but this seems to work for me.

Answer 6

This one does. There is eternity in each moment.  

Answer 7

Would it make sense as riddled?