Please provide opinion on Haiku. Cheers. : )
1.
Opened winged dove fly’s,
Glory of the winter snow,
Heaven awaits thee.
2.
Autumn shed’s its leaves,
Withered rose which lost its glow,
Beauty glows within.
3.
Nux Vomica lips,
Rain drops poring down my cheeks,
Singing winter songs.
4.
Springs inspiration,
Flower of zinc etched painting,
Art gallery piece.
5.
life summer beauty,
Flower of zinc porcelain,
Boys do mesmerize.
6.
Life summer beauty,
Flower of zinc porcelain,
Boys favourite toy.
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