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What do you think of these Haiku. Please cheek it out?

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Please provide opinion on Haiku. Cheers. : )

1.

Opened winged dove fly’s,

Glory of the winter snow,

Heaven awaits thee.

2.

Autumn shed’s its leaves,

Withered rose which lost its glow,

Beauty glows within.

3.

Nux Vomica lips,

Rain drops poring down my cheeks,

Singing winter songs.

4.

Springs inspiration,

Flower of zinc etched painting,

Art gallery piece.

5.

life summer beauty,

Flower of zinc porcelain,

Boys do mesmerize.

6.

Life summer beauty,

Flower of zinc porcelain,

Boys favourite toy.

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  1. I love them all! They all have what's needed. The first one is so peaceful (Duh, it's a dove) I LOVE the second one Because even though it doesn't say any colours you can clearly imagine them! I just adore winter so I love the first one! And I can imagine a lovely spring picture for the next one! The last two, I love the first line. They're all really pretty, my favorites are the second and the fourth but that's just my opinion, considering it's three lines and seventeen syllables it sure captures my imagination!


  2. seasonal poem

    good at your heart

    best with words

    ringing in the year

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