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What do you think of these lyrics?

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part #1 of song one.

You've been the only one for a long time.

I don't know why I changed my mind.

You're the one I want to be with.

I wish it didn't have to end like this.

You're the only one for a lifetime long

Remember that in this song.

Chorus of song #2

Everything seems to be going well,

crying every night it's just like h**l.

It's always going great, and you're

with the girl I hate....

Hiding my feelings.

Chorus of song #3

It took sometime to figure out

we were only effert but then

I noticed we were nothing, nothing, noo.

It took some time to figure out if you could

help me, help me out, no no, nothing, nothing.

noo.

I'm 12 years old and I really want to become a singer someday I

have an amazing voice. I will be making video's on youtube of me singing one of my own songs soon. stay tune.

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  1. Sorry but the way you wrote/formatted it is a little bit confusing and wierd. And the way you try to rhyme ends up awakward, keep trying though, I belive you have the potential to be good =]


  2. you shouldn't give your songs out someone will steal them i can play guitar for you i rocknroll! :p

  3. YAWWWWWWWWWWWNNNNNNNNN

    I'm sorry but those are the most common lyrics i heard in my life.  If you are serious of singing you really got to be creative you know how many people probably have lyrics like these???

  4. Your lyrics are amazing!

    Doesn't sound like something a 12 year old could come up with!

    If you hadn't have said thats how old you were I wouldn't have guessed!

    I'd love to hear you singing these lyrics then!


  5. your on the right track

  6. its good but maybe do sumot up beat your only 12 . ! enjoy it

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