What do you think of these poems? Honest!?

Question

Everyone gets embarrassed

Everyone trips and falls

Everyone burps in front of their crush

But don’t get so embarrassed that you run away

Because everyone gets embarrassed and that’s just gods way

Of saying that everyone isn’t perfect

No, not even Heidi Klum

Everyone does something that will make them fume

We all do things that we wish we didn’t do

But all I have to say is, just be you.

Answer 1

Baby Girl!  You've got skills, and I mean that.  With Everyone you eliminate the fear of embarrassment by acknowledging that even the presumably perfect people are still human.  In What Would Happen you show vulnerability to the young man that you have an obvious crush on.  If you write him a poem expressing your feelings he may forget about your average looks and explore what is most important.  Let your inner beauty continue to shine:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Ye, they were expressive and a statement of you so that's good isn't it? Lots a people will relate to the first one and some will the next one too.