What do you think of this anti-pollution video?

Question

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=fnFo-f0dIas

I'm indirectly a part of the creation of the video and I want some critism/possible improvements either on Y!A or on youtube so the people I collaborated with can look out for things to improve on the next time we make a video.

Answer 1

There was a part in the middle where something came up and said, "this is what happens..." and I don't know what the rest of it said because it went by too fast. And I couldn't hear the people talking in the beginning. I don't know if I was supposed to, but I'm just saying. I like the song, but you should either make the video longer so you can hear more of the song, or just put the chorus part of the song in it. I love that song, but the best part is the chorus!!! I thought it was pretty funny.