What do you think of this as a song/poem/rhyme?

Question

this is me, i drink tea, you drink coff-ee, we are different not the same so who's to blame?.

When i'm on the phone all you do is moan, moan, moan!

this is messed up just not right it's gona take me a-ll night let's hope i don't get into a fight oh c**p i've got a mosquito bite!

Answer 1

Pants.

Answer 2

um well...it sounds like little kiddish but i got a kick out of it. = ]

Answer 3

the bite got infected and malaria was detected just like i suspected, should i neglect it???  

Answer 4

it has no meaning, it needs to be based on one subject!

it also needs a name.

try making it into two separate poems or have a paragrph at the end explaining the meaning

Hope this helps ; x

Mwah.Xx

Answer 5

interesting! lol!

Answer 6

hahahe...That's not a poem, just simple rhymes, like limericks...It didn't make sense.

Answer 7

haha i found that funny :D i like that umm i would say its a rhyme umm  

Answer 8

err... it's ok.... it sounds a bit like Kate Nash!

But plenty of people like her songs so yeah it's ok!

Hope this helps!

Answer 9

not much but may be if i were younger dont really see the point of it

sorry

Answer 10

its cool y dont u put it on your blog or bebo and do new 1's thas kool i love you by the way 4 ever and always and i hope we stay 2gether 4 ever n always xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx