What do you think of this excerp of an original poem?

Question

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"A caricature of pain and disgrace,

Is the willow in the graveyard at Willow Place.

I finger each epitaph on every stone,

Knowing that each of these souls have gone home.

Strangely I feel a bitter pain,

And yet all I know of them is a name.

Somehow a name is enough in this place,

This place of the willow of pain and disgrace."

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I have a whole two pages....but it's not all typed. Please tell me what you think! I'm 14 by the way..if the poem seems too juvenile to you.......~Indie G

Answer 1

This is great! The other poems I've read aren't that good, the writer tries to be deep. This is just a really good poem.

Answer 2

I think it's very well written for a 14 year old. The only thing I don't understand is what is so disgraceful about a cemetery?