What do you think of this freestyle Trigee?

Question

TRIGEE: The Trigee is a three-in-one poem. They are built by combining two short poems into a third large one by stringing the lines together. The left stanza is read first, the right stanza second, then the combined lines make the third poem.

Again, there are no rhyme and meter requirements.

White woolly……………………………….......cotton ball,

Polar bear………………..................Softly ballet across,

Gripping sheets of…………...........................Pale blue,

Icy hue……………………….....................Summer sky,

Answer 1

better than your others -

white  ........... woolly ball

polar bear ..... ballet

sheets .......... blue

icy hue ......... summer sky

there you go - send it off  -

what I'd do is subscribe to Midwest Poetry Review

the editor there works with people.  you have to pay for a subscription, but it will help you get in print  - once you have a number of poems published then you can go for the better publications.

Answer 2

i think it's cute:)

Answer 3

I like this one! #1 and #2 can easily stand alone, and they blend together nicely!

Answer 4

This one needs a little help. For me, I can't get the images to mix together; Icy Summer must be an Aussie thing...

Answer 5

This is nice, and works great combined. Love poems about nature, winter the most

Edit : Oops, I just noticed it says summer there at the end , could be winter too