What do you think of this? honest truth?

Question

This is my physical theatre draft ... because i have to do it by myself, (i cannot perform at the same time as my classmates as i fractured my wrist and sprained my ankle). Any suggestions or constructive critisism would be awesome. By the way, i'm in year 10.. i.e. i'm only 15 years old!

Ideas would be great too!!! or just tell me what you think of it so far.

thanks!

p.s. you might not understand everything as you havent read the whole play... (play called 100)

A short overview of 100:

Imagine that you must choose only one memory from your entire life and capture it with a magical camera. Imagine that choosing this memory is the only way to pass through eternity. You have one hour to decide.

more:

http://www.stage-door.com/content/view/15/124/

Answer 1

ok, that was a bit long, but I will say an interesting read!  Gotta say that this would be kewl to watch!  Hope it works out well!

Answer 2

that is confusing as all h**l...i read it all, but i dont get why she keeps touching her scar, what did the mirror and he mother have to do with anything, why did she want to look beautiful? what do the papers have to do with anything...i dont knwo if maybe im just stupid, but i was so confused with the whole draft...

Answer 3

oh my god i am not reading all of that i am already confused!!

Answer 4

This is a good story line, but maybe if you have a narroator explaining the scenes, it would be more understandable.

Answer 5

We need  descriptions of the characters.  It is ok.  It is not exactly a play, but it is interesting.