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Question

the drum is the rythym of my very soul

it is who i will be always

if you dont like the beat im drummin

step out of my circle; get runnin

there is nothing left for me to say

this is who i am today.

[Chorus]

I beat to the sound of my own drum

It makes me who I am, there's nothing left to say

This is who I am today

I sing the song of my own anthem

It taught me who to be, theres nothing left to condemn

Now I know who I am

Answer 1

Have you got the music to go with it.   It could work.  Would you make it slow and defiant.... or fast and loud.   Try it.