What do you think of this invite? Does it need anything?

Question

Aloha!

You’re invited to a Luau

at the summer’s end!

Time to have some cocktails,

and celebrate with friends.

Wear your Hawaiian shirts and hula skirts,

and we’ll provide the leis!

Tim and Andrea

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Answer 1

thats actually perfect

Answer 2

That's a great invitation!  Super cute!  I'd love to see what paper or cardstock you're going to put it on!  Have a great party!

Answer 3

wow it's perfect! anyone would wanna come to that. don't change anything. make sure to put it on brightly colored paper. or if your emailing, add some island clip art

Answer 4

wow I like it great job

Answer 5

ya that sounds good

Answer 6

WOW! That's some really great wording! Its perfect, no need to add/remove anything! Have fun!

Answer 7

omg so cute! it rhymes ! =]]

like the above person said use bright paper. see if you can find some hawaiian themed cut-outs in a scrapbook section of wal-mart or something and glue them on!