What do you think of this magazine cover?

Question

I made this magazine cover for a school project. The picture is my cousin and i used "forever 21" (one of the stores i like) as the name because i couldn't really think of a name.

Tell me what you think!

http://s262.photobucket.com/albums/ii111/myworld_is_pink/?action=view&current=magazine_cover_123456.jpg

Answer 1

Use a softer background color. The background color is so strong that it kinda "sunk" the cover image. As the girl above me mentioned, there's too much bold colours in it. Maybe you can also change the font at the top of the mag (Best Bathing Suit for your Body and Budget). Kristen font is too childish in my opinion.

Answer 2

its very convincing, i like it. But maybe to make it even better, put some more designs in it, not all solid colors or fancier writing. It looks really nice though.