What do you think of this musical theatre style composition?

Question

Unfortunately the 'vocal' track sounds really funny which might distract from the actual composition.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G1-ER87GJmQ

It'd be great to know people's opinions.

Answer 1

That is sooo beautiful. I only think the castanets at the beginning should either be a tiny bit faster, or a little more elaborate.

Answer 2

I like it. I could choreograph an excellent pointe work contemporary dance to it. Maybe use a slightly better keyboard effect to give a bigger sound quality. Then it would really come alive.

Answer 3

Its beautiful!

If you wrote it, then well done :]

The flute plays a gorgeous melody, and the chords at about a third into the piece fit really nicely

Your a right about the vocals though, lol, they do sound a bit funny! But the minus the dodgy 'ahh'ing, its a very well written melody line (:

Not to keen on the last quarter of the piece though, i thought the intervals between the notes were a bit too jumpy in comparison with the rest of the piece. Also, some more dynamics would be good too.

But it is a brilliant piece. I love it :]

Whoever composed this, I expect to see your music in West End soon !

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Answer 4

The song is quite shallow, you need to make it a bit deeper. And lyrics would be gd