Its very unfinished. I just wanted to know what everyone thinks of the love comparison to a swamp. Also, the first bit doesn't match, I wonder if I shoul move it to the bottom, or if you have any other suggestions that would be great.... and no "Its too long" I hate those...
Life's Great Tragedy
Love
Remains Mysterious.
A needless emotion
That fuels our needs.
Life's great tragedy
Beautiful heartbreak.
Stunning bliss.
Love
Is a swamp
That resides
In your heart.
The stagnant water
Stares back into
The depths of your
Soul.
With a breathless
Moan, you discover
Your true self.
Wading through
The shadows
Still searching for
Life.
Vines entrap your vision.
The aging trunks of trees
Are perpetually moist.
Odor emits like
Steam from the
The murky depths.
Love
Is a swamp.
Heinous havok
Lurks here,
Hidden from your eyes,
Towing behind
Your Imagination.
Fear
Is almost poetic
Among this
This rancid scene,
Ripped from the
Nightmare fantasy,
Of Dante's Inferno.
Love
Is dark and deadly.
An endless forest,
Trapped away,
With Grendel-like
Monsters, capable of
Glowing eyes and razor fangs
Love
Is worth it all.
Through this miserable
Bog, you will find
The end will never come
You search again for something new
To find only yourself.
Life
Is worth living,
Because love requires
Growth above this
Horrid Swamp,
Find yourself
Love yourself.
Love
Ever after, another.
And together traverse
This wicked warpath.
Overcome beasts
And fearfull nights
And triumph.
Life
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