What do you think of this poam I wrote?

Question

When you look at me do you really see all my inperfections Do you see it in my eyes or the simile Ive been trying to hid behind Ive made some changes that dont seem like me Those Inperfections. (this poem belongs to me no copy right fragment give me reasons why you dont like it or if you do like it and reasons thank you)

Answer 1

A dictionary

would be quite useful to you.

Purchase one right now.

See I made a poem. You need a dictionary. Lots of spelling and grammar errors. Poem is spelled P-O-E-M just to let you know.

Answer 2

When you look at me do you really see all my inperfections

Do you see it in my eyes or the simile I've been trying to hid behind

I've made some changes that dont seem like me Those Inperfections

It could be better, lots better

Answer 3

its ok...

Answer 4

It's alright.

Answer 5

I think it's really short and contains some grammatical errors, other than that i think you got a good idea going. maybe work on it somemore.

Answer 6

huh