What do you think of this poem, wrote it awhile ago, not sure if it is any good?

Question

Wrote this awhile ago, thought it was good then, but not so sure now

Going Green

Our plant was once a wonderful place

Filled with green grass and beautiful flowers

There were no houses or factories to disturb

The delicate balance of nature

Today trash covers the green grass

And pollutiion clounds the sky

We are tearing down forests,

To build houses and shopping centers for us

The ozone layer is slowly disappearing,

The earth is slowly decaying

If we don't do someething radical

We will have even being problem which cannot be fixed

You might be sick of hearing: reduce, reuse, recycle,

But this is what we need to do to save our earth

We can't undo what we have already done,

But we can do our part so future generations

Can enjoy Earth's beauty

We are all blessed with one home, the earth

And we need to do all we can to save it,

So reduce, reuse,

RECYCLE!

Any thing I need to change?

Thanks in advance for your help!

Answer 1

sounds like you are in touch- people write really good stuff when they find themselves in this sphere- I hope you are putting them all into a little book for your future.

Answer 2

i think its great. good for you for having the imagination to write something like this. sounds like you are good at it!

Answer 3

Well, the last line in your 3rd stanza (the 12th line) doesn't make sense, you could fix that.  Lines 1, 6 and 11 have spelling errors. Otherwise, it's presented well, and written well although it does sound like a 'going green' advertisement or poster, it is still well written, I'd give it a 9.

Answer 4

i like it