What do you think of this poem I threw together?

Question

I wrote it ages ago to a girl called Megan for her birthday. Took me like 2 minutes so don't be too harsh :P

Moody, angry and bitter,

Evil, dastardly,

Guilty and Shrew

And amongst all these things

None of them are you.

:)

Answer 1

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!

Answer 2

thats good, but untill the last line, it sounds kind mean. but i still like it.the last 2 lines are, like, lifesavers

Answer 3

lol, its good and to the point.

Answer 4

that's cute

Answer 5

Precise and to the point but clever.

Answer 6

Its very good. You should try and get it printed in a local newspaper.

Well done, you got some real talent. :D:D

My favorite lines are the last two.

you had a brilliant ending. Megan must of been blown away.

Good Luck with it.

:D:D x

Answer 7

I hope for your sake she's not reading this to find out how little time and effort you invested in her birthday gift.

Next time, get her some chocolate.