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What do you think of this poem I wrote? I warn you, it's pretty long!?

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I don't know why I wrote this poem. I just was reading about prejudice on the Internet a while ago, and I got really mad and just wrote. Tell me what you think, if you can read it all without getting bored.

Why did God make colors?

Shades of black and white

That are really brown or tan

And never the color we call it?

Faces painted with his colors,

Colors that split us apart,

Colors that paint pictures

In little hating heads

That different is bad?

Or maybe it is us

Making these pictures,

Draping faces with labels,

Shining cloths of hate,

That obscure the person

And leave a color or name behind.

Maybe it is us

Looking at a person

And seeing color first.

Perhaps God should have made

A world of colorblind,

Where color had no meaning.

Perhaps we should have listened

To the spirit

And not the color.

Perhaps all of us should have

Learned we were wrong.

Would it have made a difference?

Perhaps.

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  1. yeah i got bored....

    :D


  2. good message. lacked i structure sorry keep working on it

  3. I listen to the spirits everyday so speak for yourself.

  4. thats really good.........i feel the same way about pejudice........i really liked ur poem

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