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What do you think of this poem? Please criticize if need be, I just want your guys' opinion. Peace.?

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Tonight it's the city

and its beat back cats!

Thriving on good music

and carousing to the jazz

that cuts and swings through the night

like a fierce hurricane

blowing down all you cats

overwhelming you in your

speedy and exhilarated peaked euphoria

at finally being free

and in love

with your women

if only you could remember her name...

But no matter!

Tonight it's you

and your ragged entourage

of swing enthusiasts

and conscious liberators

blowing tea into your face

and drinking from the bottle.

Hide it! Now pass it by me

yes me,

and spare me your trials and doubts

that's not life, that's just a mortal man's h**l

but, well...that's just not me

so gleefully cry on that man's shoulder,

and sleep and curl up on that rug

the heat wafting from the supermarket

will keep you alive,

and keep you alternating from the

freezing spikes of the bay.

I am sorry your life found

Not what it was looking for.

but when I found

what I was looking for

I simply turned over in bed

and in a drunken stupor

and the piercing pounding morning sunlight

kissed my sleeping lover’s nose.

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  1. That was very interesting. I loved the voice, what a character!

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