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What do you think of this poem? Please help me? Just let me know your opinion.?

by Guest64615  |  earlier

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The Meaning Of Life

The sun will never set,

And the moon will never rise,

Rain will cease to fall,

From behind these listless eyes.

The rose will never weep,

And leaves just will not fall,

There will be no path to tread

Which meets only a brick wall.

Heaven will never rain,

The bombs that were made by man,

And disease will not be rife,

Throughout this wonderland.

A sweet rainbow of colours

Will be accepted by all,

No hatred between Brothers,

No causing others fall.

A Place of no hunger,

No famine! And No strife!

A perfect world! A heaven here!

That is the true meaning of life.

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  1. it's pretty good , but it sounds a bit robotic at times.

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  2. I liked it i have the same opinion THIS IS THE TRUE MEANING OF LIFE.

  3. This poem has rhyming cuplets - im sure there called, its a great poem just like life :)

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