What do you think of this poem? Written by a 15 year old?

Question

Any constructive poem would be appreciated :]

Also a possible title?

Thank you.

Our blind love constantly comes to mind, love.

You and I combined, you and I intertwined.

We were designed to be a perfect kind.

With you, I was in bliss,

With every touch and every kiss.

This can’t be dismissed, since my feelings still persist.

I know it's dumb of me to keep doing this,

To constantly reminisce.

You always manage to be in my line of vision,

You and me as a beautiful collision.

I wish I didn’t make such a ****** up decision.

I just want the world to reset because losing you is my one regret.

I’m upset, and I just want to forget.

Give me the alcohol and the cigarettes.

No, I don’t want to forget a single emotion

Or both of our devotions despite outside commotion.

1 hour ago - 3 days left to answer.

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1 hour ago

Although I seem to be sedating and innovating,

I actually am hating that I keep on restating

How I’m still hoping and wait

Answer 1

You have very nice wording and excellent detail. If you are trying to come up with a title for your work why don't you try pulling it out of the poem itself - try this -  Beautiful Collision.

Answer 2

BLIND    LOVE