the beginning might be a little cheesy. . .
what if you were gone forever
leaving my thoughts to wonder an endless dessert
when the only one to blame is myself
as we go on, you smile fades into a blank stare
all i have left is the brief memory we share
were they anything to you?
your have stained my everyday life
everything brings back the fluttery feeling
the butterflies now eaten by wasps
. . . .
didn't get any further
this is my first poem that i decided to write on my own
incase you didn't understand the butterfly part, i meant the nervous but light feelings ("butterflies in my stomach"), now only stings
how can i end it?
has anyone else felt the same? share with me :)
please give me some suggestions
i will vote for the best answer :)
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