What do you think of this poem i made for my dad on Father's day wen i was 8?

Question

Feel Good :)

I hope you feel good,

I hope you feel happy,

i hope you feel better,

just like the way you should,

i Wish you could stop that horrible drinking,

But i can feel it, our hands are linking!

Please don't cry,

I'll love you forever

yes, I LOVE YOU i'm not shy!

This is for you,

My Blind, Lovable Father

from me, your beloved daughter

HAPPY FATHER'S DAY! <3

Answer 1

terrific ur gonna be big someday

Answer 2

it sounds like you love him a lot :)

but in a way it&#039;s sad...

you seemed like a good kid.

Answer 3

Very caring. Did it work, did he stop drinking?

Answer 4

this si really good for 8, especially the 1st verse.

however, as your older i think you should spruce it up a bit.

but the personal aspect is amazing.  

Answer 5

aww thats really cute :]

you were a talanted 8th grader.

Answer 6

that is such a cute poem. and it says a lot

Answer 7

That&#039;s really good for an 8 year old.

LOL! [=

Answer 8

that  was good

Answer 9

lame

Answer 10

That was more than cute...that was a bit deep for an 8 year old.