What do you think of this poem?? i really need your thoughts :/?

Question

I put up a front to others, not to let anyone know

Looking like I’m doing just fine but I feel alone

Acting like I don’t care when she speak to me

But she’s the only person these days I wish to see

I miss everything about you; the things u say or do

How bad I wish to say that I love you.

I don’t know how we got to this stage

Was it my immature ways or our young age?

Maybe it was either, both or just neither

At the time I should have not, I believed her

People don’t get it; they say they wouldn’t talk to her again.

But I just can’t help it; she was my girl, my lover and my best friend.

Answer 1

Wow, that's heartbreaking.

There're 2 ways, wait or forget.

I'm living with this proverb "good things come to those who wait."

I know I can wait as long as I live.  

Can you?  If you're uncertain, you can try to wait as long as you can or you can try to forget.

Answer 2

wow

that was really good.

i dont know what to say.

Answer 3

OMG,, PHILOSOPHY POETRY.  They are two TOTALLY DIFFERENT THINGS!!!!

Answer 4

i think this is a very deep kind of writing. the kinda th really makes people think. good work :)

Answer 5

I  love it!!!

I also added something in the mix, hope you don't mind, but it goes with your last line.

But I just can't help it; she was my girl, my lover and my best friend.

And I can't pretend my feelings for her, I love her so much that my heart aches for her.

No other girl can feel this void, to live without her is a life I would rather avoid.

So I sit back and alone I cry, because inside I know that without her my soul will die.