What do you think of this poem my friend wrote?

Question

the mindless ravels of a little used conscience

so I had set down by the riverside

casting röks into its greenish depths

when upon me came a plump young fellow

whose hair was gold as midday sun

he asked what the rocks meant

I told him twas only for fun

a bird beat upon the water with its trovelling wings

and he said, well I had best be offering

a deal to you so great you had only abide

by the writing signed upon the tide

until fog rose up against the moor

and the long black shadows cast out from me

the man to whom I had inquired

when a wight bessechingly spoke

its ghastly murmer

immediately I turned to run

but felt that my legs were cold as ice

he struck upon me many a time with his bloody dagger

until I was no more

which is why I tell this story

to warn all those who go out in the fog of day

but then again, maybe the travel was worth the risk

or it might not have been

since death is cold and reeling (to quote hendrix)

Answer 1

ummm....i don't know. I don't really understand it...=/ It sounds like a good poem....i'm not sure. most of the words are words I have no clue what they mean! LOL

Answer 2

its intresting, i like it

Answer 3

Very good, i write some poetry myself, and i tihnk thats amazing.

Answer 4

it pretty good

Answer 5

Its nice