What do you think of this poem (my sister wrote it)

Question

Our dog of 17 years passed Wednesdayensday night sadly of congestive heart failure.We did eveything possible to save her just to be able to get a few more months but her body was weak and she was ready to go.She had a wonderful life that most dogs can only dream of and lived it to the fullest until she got sick 2 weeks ago.She was loved and she will be dearly missed.My sister wrote this poem and I am going to add some pictures of Ginger and frame it for all of us she was part of our family.

A Prayer For Ginger Lynn

Dear GOD I know I have an angel that belongs to you here on earth

I pray for some more time with her

I have loved her since her birth

Dear GOD I know you love her but I love her to

Give me a few more years before she comes to live with you

Dear GOD I know she is one of you angels even though she doesn't have wings

I see you in her eyes she makes my heart sing

Dear GOD how can I live without her she's been there all my life

So I pray for a miracle heal my Ginger Lynn tonight..

Answer 1

That is a very touching poem and your sister is very talented.

Best wishes

Answer 2

I think that it is wonderful and so much love my eyes filled with tears, I think anyone who has lost a pet who was like a family member knows what you are all feeling, this is so good, I am sure glad I read it, thank you  for writing it

Answer 3

wow!

that was a wonderful poem... it was really touching... i remembered my pet who died...

Answer 4

wow i love it. that is so nice of you to do that for your dog.

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Answer 5

touching and very pretty

Answer 6

Yeah, it's nice, but don't capitalize the word god it makes if stick out like a sore thumb.

Answer 7

sounds good but I don't know wat it is about

Answer 8

very nice poem..it dipicts enormous love that you showered on ginger

Answer 9

tragic, really really tragic. its just an exercise in words nothing else, it fails to create impact. what did you do with the dog afterward? if it had been my dog i would of eaten it, all that meat going to waste...

Answer 10

awwwe i think thats sweet alothough it sem more like a prayer than  poem to me

could use more catch or something to it to be a better poem

im not sure im not a poem expert

Answer 11

wow! its very nice =)

Answer 12

Thats really sweet and special! It makes me think of the way I would feel when my dogs die.

Answer 13

I am so sorry for the loss of your dog. Pets really do become part of the family, and the grief we feel at their passing is very real.

Answer 14

Its a beautiful poem.. but i think there is a small typo - Dear GOD I know she is one of your (instead of you) angels even though she doesn't have wings.

Thanks for sharing it.