What do you think of this poem please use suggestions

Question

some stars rest

on the black velvet sky

others relax

behind the scenes

all a part of the vast universe

wheter alone and bold

or clusterd together

they all play a part

in lighting the worlds

so why would one

with its own special shine

want anothers luster

could it be

that it doenst realize

all stars light the world:

there are many ways to shine

Answer 1

I really like this poem. It's great!  

Answer 2

The poor spelling doesn't help. That aside the diction is poor and the timing is awful  

Answer 3

I like it, despite the typos

(whether, clustered, doesn't )

.....simple philosophy, and interesting metaphor