What do you think of this poem "The end"?

Question

The end

Who am I ,I wondered

What to do i feard

At candle light i pondered

My thoughts screaming to be heard

My end is near

You see

Erupting emotions of utter fear

Breathing flames from burning tears

My end is near

After all these years

Yet what have i done to deserve such fate?

Is it fair for me to feel such hate

“Dont give up now ! “people cried

but dont you see i’ve lost my pride?

Alone ,running out of places to hide

No one around ,by my side

Answer 1

The 2 last verses after "No one around, by my side" should say..

maybe this is near my certain time.

This could be the end.

Answer 2

just to clarify they shouldn't SAY anything it's your poem...I think it's a good start. Some revisiont and spell checking is necessary. But it carries a lot of emotion.

Keep working at it!