What do you think of this poem that i just wrote???

Question

My Sweet Summer Thoughts

Setting sun.

orange pastel.

Purple heart.

Gazing blue.

We sit

and we watch.

I miss you

when you leave me.

The moon hangs in the sky

for one more night

and we sit and listen to the silence.

When stars shoot by

I only wish for one thing.

You.

The sun rises one more day.

only to be covered in clouds.

Those blasted gray clouds.

The water droplets so fine

and perfect

wet my face.

They cleanse me and I wait.

It down pours and I run.

Run endlessly

to you.

We meet

and our arms touch.

Mine are wrapped around your neck

and I whisper a sweet secret

in your ear.

You smile and I

smile back at you.

I look deep in your eyes and see

a heart.

No

a soul of happiness.

I love your eyes

because they tell me

what I want to know.

Summer…

ahh sweet,

sweet

summer!

Answer 1

not really a poem lol

more like the lyrics to a potential song...

however, i find the way you expressed yourself to be absolutely incredible!

keep up the good work :)