What do you think of this poem?Please Critique!=)

Question

sitting in this room waiting for my demise

Looking into your eyes their you disguise

But to my surprise i realize I'm ready for compromise

trying to forget the past looking to the future

You reach for my hand as i pull away I'm done with this confusion it come to my conclusion

you will never change your cheating ways

ir is who you are and who you will stay

I love you but for now I must make my own way

The past is you future but my future is still waiting to be played

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For those of you who could not tell what this was about Basically it is about a cheating boyfriend but this girl keeps going back to him and this time she finally leaves him beginning she is contemplating death and usually she cant resist his eyes but this time she does the compromise is to break up because he will never change so she is going out on her own for the first time in a long time and the ending is saying his life will always be the same but she is still waiting to see what hers will be like.

Answer 1

Its way to rhymey make at last a ABAB rhyme scheme

Answer 2

its good, i love it

you might want to check the spelling on a few of your words, but other than that its good.

Answer 3

It's nice

Answer 4

I really like your poem!

Answer 5

That's a very nice poem! just a few misspellings but I'm guessing you didn't mean to do them. Overall is really well phrased, good structure and good choice of words. Simple and interesting enough.

I guess I could give you a 7.5 out 10.

Good work!

Answer 6

WoW!....I love it!