What do you think of this poems?

Question

A TEAR OF LOVE.

Indeed this rose captured my

attention. As I stood before it's

presence. I heard the ocean

whisper, as the heaven's opened

it's beauty, my tears became

great drop's of blood. As it's

petals became razor's that

cut it's way into my heart,

Indeed this rose became

A TEAR OF LOVE.

Answer 1

Masterfully Beautiful !!!!

Answer 2

if i order a pizza will anyone have a slice

Answer 3

Great job, I really enjoyed it. The rhythm really had me going.

You should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think. I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!

Answer 4

cool

your a good writer

- ♥ Taylor ♥

Answer 5

This is very moving and inspiring. I like to write poetry myself and I have to say this is a truly wonderful poem.  

Answer 6

i love it love it ok!!!!

Answer 7

idk .... i like it but the part that really touch my heart is As its petals became razor's that cuts it way into my heart, indeed this rose became a tear of love  

Answer 8

whoa.  That is a really good poem... No, I am not just saying that.