What do you think of this??????

Question

I think its love,

people say its obsession,

I say I love him to death,

But my friends might not beleive me,

I can never get him off my mind,

I can never sleep without thinking about him,

He can't know that I love him ,

Or else what could happen,

I can't stand the pain,

Of getting hurt again.

Answer 1

It sounds really good.

Young.

Well written.

I think your in love also, and I believe you.

Answer 2

sorry, not feelin it

Answer 3

Aw was that poem written for me? *tear*

Answer 4

Its brill. It really makes us feel sad and alone awww but its so good, i would enter than in a comp x x

Answer 5

ooh... i like it!

Answer 6

deep real good

sounds like me when i was in so called "love"

lmao

but anyways very good.

Answer 7

Ya that sound brill!

Its really deep and meaningful!

And Im sure that there are many people that would agree with that poem!

It really touched me!

try subiting it anoymusly on a website or paper or somthing and see what revew you get!

xoxo

Answer 8

its a very good poem. It's very intense and descriptive. the poem kinda makes me feel something, it doesnt just wash away. Good job!

Answer 9

that is so good! omg i cant believe u actually wrote that!!!!!! it sounds like something a professional would do. keep up the good work. you are awesome =)