What do you think of this random poem that I wrote at work just now?

Question

It kind of reminds me of my job...

The Order of Things

Why do all of the tiles

Line up perfectly on the floor

And collectively agree to get stepped on

Without asking what it's for?

Which highway stripe leads the others

In their single-file line?

Do they even know they’re actually going

to the place marked on the sign?

Who decided that “they” that say

Can never say things wrong?

They say that we don’t give a *amn

And whatever is said, we follow along.

Answer 1

I like it a lot, it's nice. Makes you think.

Answer 2

it;s good:) you're question you're way of life and they way things are suppose to be. it makes you stop and think about you're life when you read it. adn it makes oyu think about how much we are realy controlled by others. not even being conciouss of it. its good :):)

Answer 3

now i'll look at tiles and highways and remember your poem everytime!

Mike P

Answer 4

it's ok, better than a lot of the other poems I see on yahoo answers  

Answer 5

It's a nice poem, but what is "random" about it?

I know "random" is a popular word recently, but it doesn't make sense in your question.

A good writer needs a great command of the English language.

Answer 6

"pretty" enough.