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What do you think of this rhyme ?

by Guest58765  |  earlier

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so last night i put out a few bars of this and people liked it so i wrote some more so tell me what you think about it and for the beat i'm writing this to the bars sound better short

what do you know about

the hustle the struggle

the grams the fam

the pain the scars

doin life behind bars

the lies the deception

the cocaine resurrection

the constant meditation

the self deprivation

the natural medication

the unconditional dedication

the hating the waiting

watching your life fading

the money from the blood

the gun thrown in the mud

the good the evil

putting in work

for the people

the death of a friend

the biting of the hand

the knowledge the learning

the needle the burning

the academics the lessons

the burden the blessings

the heroin the crack

the 19 year old that died of a heart attack

the money the green back

the moving of a h pack

the d the bundle

the poor the humble

the flame the spoon

the spinning the room

the screams the tears

when one of your homies disappears

the funeral the casket

the glock made of plastic

the revenge the right

the cringe the fight

the wasted the years

the scared the fears

the cop the criminal

the reason is minimal

not just sayin forget it

but staying committed

the pain of hunger

the mistakes of the younger

the man down under

the thoughts the wonder

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  1. Heavy.


  2. Sound poetic kinda like common or somethin keep writin 10 outa 10

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