What do you think of this short poem I wrote?

Question

It's called "A Story Of Love."

Rating out of 10, suggestions, opinions?

I’ve discovered your wings,

fly away with me.

let’s travel over the sea,

and discover things.

you are what I want to be.

We can create a world,

where we both will live, breath… exist

and in this ecstasy, we’ll forget how we first kissed.

we’ll sleep all day, laying curled,

and listen to love songs.

You are

my angel;

I am your dove.

And we,

are in love.

Answer 1

awww its so cute im sure many people would love to recieve this poem

Answer 2

10/10 from me. I liked it alot, to me its a very powerfull poem. keep up the great writting. =)

Answer 3

10 i love it

Answer 4

I like it, sounds like something i would find in a poetry book.

well done :]

Answer 5

its ok ill give it a 8/9

Answer 6

9. its prety good

Answer 7

I would give it a 8 out of 10.  It is very good.  I appreciate you sharing it with us.